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Copy Critique: 10 Quick Ways to Pump Up the Persuasion on BookinaBox.com

Paige Swaffer April 26, 2018

Today we’re critiquing The Book in a Box homepage. Join me in the video below and grab some quick ideas for punching up the persuasion on your sales pages. #1. Hero: Hook your visitor with a compelling value proposition You hero section (i.e. the first section on a page) is

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